Monday, the
toughest day of the week for me, is followed by Tuesday.Though I engage with the world a little
easier on Tuesday, I still feel as though I would like to spend the day
floating in a coffee cup.Not just for
the extra shot of caffeine, but because floating is a state of pure relaxation.
If you look at
the picture at the top of my blog, you’ll see my favorite aqua colored coffee
cup.It’s a large cup that holds double
what a typical coffee cup does.I can
imagine placing an expanded version of it on my patio and climbing in, much
like a hot tub.The coffee cup is much
deeper though, and my feet would be unable to touch.I could slip a pastel colored noodle beneath my legs and
float from side to side, or I could use my own buoyancy and lie in the middle
of the cup, close my eyes, and enjoy the peaceful bob.
It probably
wouldn’t take very long for the caffeine contaminated water to seep into the
pores of my skin and energize me to the point that floating would no longer be
relaxing. So in hindsight, floating in a
cup full of coffee would probably not be such a good idea.It’s a fun exercise though, thinking about
silly or impossible things.It does get
the creative juices flowing and helps me to face the day.
Imagine, if you
will, leaving a cruise ship for a day excursion into Progresso, Mexico.The ship has docked at the end of a three-mile
long pier leaving the only transportation into town by way of bus.Viewing the pier from the deck shortly after
breakfast, you note the pool and bar area that lead to a small shopping center.In front of the shopping center is a line of
buses waiting to take those interested parties into town for shopping or
sightseeing.You hurry back to your room
to gather the items needed for your excursion, collect the family, and head
toward the elevator that will take you to the exit doors in the lower bowels of
the ship.
Exiting the ship
entails multiple pictures by the cruise line followed by catching up with two
twenty-year-old boys who, in Mexico, are of drinking age and have shots waiting
for you when you reach the bar area.Slamming those down on top of eggs and bacon, you drag them away from
the alcohol and through the shopping center toward the local transportation
that will take you into town.By the
time you make it to the bus stop, it appears all the luxury buses have
departed, leaving only a ramshackle shell with wheels.
Looking at one
another with trepidation (yes, if you haven’t figured it out by now, this is not
a fictional story but one that our family actually encountered), we climbed the
rusty stairs and entered the bus.Saying
it was on its last leg is being kind.The seats, doubles on each side, had foam and springs escaping from
their worn, stained cloth bodies.They
were covered with plastic, we could only assume, actually, let’s not go
there.There was plastic draped over the
window openings as well.Any glass that
had once been there was long gone.We
followed the boys to the bench seat at the very back of the bus.
As we gently sat
on the plastic covering, we chuckled nervously.The ride was only three miles, how bad could it be?Once the bus was full, the driver released
the clutch, sending the bus rolling forward while our bodies slammed backward
against the plastic bench behind us.The
rickety vehicle slowly moved forward, circled the parking lot, and made a
creaky turn onto the pier, heading toward town.With the boys laughing, my husband and I clasped each other’s hands and
said silent prayers that we would make it the three miles in this dilapidated hunk
of junk.
Wind blew in through
the open windows sending the loose plastic dancing in its wake.The view of the turquoise water stretching
out on either side of the pier should have given us peace, but before we could
enjoy the scenery, the front of the bus rolled over a speed bump the size of
Mount Vesuvius.When the back of the bus
reached the mountain, all four of our bodies went airborne, butts leaving the
seats and everyone’s head but mine (being short comes in handy sometimes)
hitting the ceiling before returning with a lame thump onto the permanently
indented bench beneath us.Again,
nervous laughter filled the air.By the
time we regained breathing rights, the second speed bump was beneath us and up
in the air we traveled again.There were
three speed bumps in all.At this point,
part of me wished we’d stayed at the bar.Finally,
at what seemed an hour later, we arrived at the opposite end of the three-mile
pier, unloaded ourselves, and walked away as quickly as possible.
I’m sure that
you have your own “back of the bus” story.If not, my suggestion to you is that when it does happen, buy another
round of shots at the bar and stay close to the boat!
I grew up with a
rotary dial phone.Mine was pumpkin
orange.I’m not sharing this to date
myself but to share the simplicity of that particular device.In fact, you only had to dial the last four
numbers of the nine-digit number to reach any other phone in town.It made it easy to remember thirty different
phone numbers in your head at one time.As a teenager, I exhausted many hours on our one family phone line
jabbering with my friends.There were no
answering machines at that time.If no
one was home to answer the phone, it would ring on in perpetual anticipation
until the caller made the disconnection.It left us free to detach from the world of technology every time we left
our house and to associate with people the old-fashioned way.
The time for such
phone number memorization is over. There
are only two or three phone numbers that I can recall at this very moment.My own cell phone number is not included
among those.I don’t have to remember
them.My cell phone recalls every number
with the flick of a fingertip.Most of
my conversations aren’t carried through various towers by voice, they’re
accomplished through text.I feel
pressure leaving the house without my phone in my purse or my pocket because I
might miss an attempted connection.
People talk and
text constantly.We answer our phones in
restaurants, malls, and movie theaters.People text in class, in the middle of face-to-face conversations with others,
and while driving a two thousand pound car down the highway. Sadly, the latter takes lives.How have we become so dependent on digital gadgetry?We are so intent on connecting with those in
our cell phone directory that we tend to ignore those standing or sitting
beside us. We become self-absorbed and hardened
to the world around us.
I have learned
through experience that the most important thing in this world is its
people.It doesn’t matter whether we’re
young, old, rich, poor, extraverted or introverted.Neither race nor religion matters.People matter.You matter.The person next to you matters.Will you put your phone down to look your neighbor in the eye?A smile or a small touch can change someone’s
day or change their outlook.A kind word
can has the power to change someone’s self-worth.
It only takes a
moment to acknowledge someone else.Today, I am leaving my phone at home.If you call, you’re hear my request for you to leave a message following
the beep.Please do.I will get back with you.Today
my attention will be focused on those who God puts in my path.Maybe tonight, I’ll have a new phone number
to add to my directory.And if not, I’ll
be content knowing that today, I put others before myself.
Ladies, for most
of us, each day usually starts out the same way.We shower, shave, apply our makeup, hair
products, and blow dryer.We dress,
apply deodorant, and top off the outfit with the appropriate jewelry accompaniments.We then inhale breakfast and if we scheduled
enough time (most likely not) sit down to enjoy a cup of coffee and a brief perusal
of the newspaper before climbing in the car and heading off to work.It’s another day invested in corporate America.
And weekends, what’s
considered our time is usually spent
catching up on everything that our day job prevents us from achieving during
the work week.It’s an exhausting circle
of replication.
This was my life
before letting go of the corporate day job with the repetitive schedule for my dream
job of full time writing. I can now set
my own hours, which are no doubt more than my corporate hours were, but they
are my choice to schedule.I can work
when my creativity level is highest and not just during an allotted time frame.
I can climb out
of bed and have breakfast in my screened Florida room while listening to the
birds chatter within the surrounding greenery of our house.I can read the paper, converse with my
husband, give my pups some hands-on loving, and then head to my office – a mere
steps away still wearing my pajamas and with my hair sticking straight up (if I
want to)!I don’t have to log personal,
sick, or vacation time.I can talk
things through or plan things out with my business partner husband, but we have
no annual reviews.However, we do have a
business plan that keeps us on track and allows us to enjoy lunch and cheap
movie dates on Tuesday afternoons.
So yes, I have
traded in my eyeliner for crayons.The crayons
referred to here are the keys of my computer that allow me to add color and vibrancy
to my fictional stories.They are bright
and colorful worlds just waiting for guidance.The bigger the crayon box, the better!
My wish for you
is that you can dream big and trade in your eyeliner for crayons too.
·Batman
& Robin – as soon as
the bat phone rings or the bat light shines, Bruce Wayne and Dick Grayson don
their suits to take on Gotham City with the ever intensifying, yet coolest
modes of transportation.
·Captain
America – enhanced to
the peak of human perfection by an experimental serum, Steve Rogers is armed
with an indestructible, boomerang-like shield.It’s a weapon that can both destroy and defend as each crisis dictates.
·The
Incredible Hulk - when
angered, Dr. Bruce Banner’s congenial persona explodes into a gigantic, green,
irradiated, mutated humanoid monster with incredible strength.Evil doers need beware.
·Spiderman, after suffering a radioactive spider
bite, Peter Parker is quick to find himself swinging off buildings with his
web-shooters, using his spider sense, and fighting crime in every way he can
(when he’s not in school).
·Superman, one of the original super heroes, Clark
Kent poses as an employee at the Daily Planet newspaper by day.By night however, he is the mask wearing, cape
flapping, Lois Lane courting, steel bodied, speeding bullet of a crime stopper.
·Thor – this hammer wielding god is the
perfect specimen of manliness (for the ladies), with thunder, lightning,
storms, oak trees, strength, the protection of mankind, and also hallowing,
healing and fertility (for the men).
Though each the
above are viable stars and rake in movie money hand over fist (especially when
joining forces), my favorite Super Hero is my grandson.He has all the costumes, which he is unafraid
of mixing and matching to create his own brand of super hero capabilities.It’s unbeknownst to him that this can be a
little confusing for those around him to compete against.Regardless, his partner in crime, Princess
Leia (the family pup), wreak havoc upon the neighborhood together as they disperse
their own brand of super heroism - tough as nails until snack time.My little super hero still takes the
occasional nap, converses only until what needs to be communicated is complete,
loves his Super Hero bedroom, and yes, wears floaties in the pool.
I look down at
my hands on the keyboard as my fingers dance over the keys on a mission to
spill words onto the page.Hands are
tiny things of wonder when a newborn babe latches onto your finger, as well as
wrinkled, age-spotted laborers peacefully crossed over the chest of your 101
year old grandmother as she is laid to rest.From beginning to end, they are everything in between.
As small
children, they touch toys and books, pets and dirt, walls and doors, mom and
dad.
As adolescence,
they touch sports gear and homework, sweepers and lawn mowers, cell phones and
IPods, steering wheels and keyboards, and clasp tightly with the hand of
someone they’ve become smitten with.
As adults, they
caress loved ones, touch their children in love or discipline, work to protect
a job of choice, and are used tirelessly throughout the course of each
day.
At any age, our
hands mirror in prayer, rest across our hearts in patriotism, clap in our joy,
wipe away our tears or those of others, hug those around us, stroke our pets,
clasp the faces of loved ones, twist in anguish, express emotion, play musical
instruments, build something from scratch, tear it down, paint, draw, write,
and the list goes on and on and on.
Through this
writing, I’ve realized what my hands represent and how I need to put them to
better use.There are many things my
hands can do that they are not.As I
mirror them in prayer, I will ask God for more responsibility where my hands
are concerned.May they be blessed and
used as instruments of love in this broken world.
What special
things are your hands responsible for?If you could make them do something, anything, what would it be?
“Dance like no one is watching.Love like you’ve never been hurt.Sing like no one is listening.Live like it’s heaven on earth.”
This quote by William Purkey is one of my favorites.Think about the things you do when no one is
around to view your actions or pass judgment upon you.I love to dance.Slow music or fast, it doesn’t matter.My body involuntarily moves to the beat, no
matter where I am.It is joy, it is
freedom, it is spontaneous, and it is free.So, dance, love, sing, and live, as though this is your last day on
earth!You won’t regret it.
If your day needs a little chuckle on the topic of dancing, click
the following link for an excerpt from the first chapter in my book The Chicken Club.
When an idea for
a novel hits me, the first thing I do is WRITE IT DOWN.If I don’t, the idea disappears, completely,
within minutes.I’ve lost a great many
ideas into the vast black hole in my head.Some of them were quite good too.Frustration doesn’t begin to describe the loss.
Once I pick a premise
for a story, I work the plot over and around in my head, feeling it out, testing
the theory.Is the idea strong
enough to carry an audience through an entire novel?Who are my characters and what problems am I
going to face them with?Once I start to
pull this information together, I begin an outline.I start with my characters, creating their
physical features and working through to their inner cores.Once I have an intimate understanding of who they
are, I plan out my storyline chapter by chapter from beginning to end so that I
have some guidance through which to maneuver as I share my story.
The outline is a
rough model at best and most of the time I follow it, adding, changing, or deleting
things as the story develops.Having the
outline tends to keep me on track.I
live in my head so it’s easy to get distracted and before I know it, I’ve taken
the fork in the road heading in the opposite direction.If I know where I want the story to end, I
can keep my attention focused and not waste days writing scenes that will
eventually be deleted in their entirety.My motto is:It is better to add
than delete!
In my experience
of writing, the process of a novel feels a little like following a rainbow.In the excitement of starting a new project,
the beginning chapters pour onto the pages quickly.However, the middle of the story comes more slowly, as if writing
uphill.Once you crest the top of the
rainbow and start down again, the chapters begin to flow more quickly.By the time you get to the pot of gold at the
finish line, your hair is standing on end from the surge of electrical
excitement.
I can’t describe
the feeling of infinite joy that fully completing the draft brings.Forget the editing.That is a job for another day. Today, I will head directly toward the
wine cabinet and the biggest glass I can find for a little personal
celebration.Why don’t you pull up a
chair and join me? (Oh, and I you don't mind, bring a can of hairspray. My hair needs a little help.)
This title
describes my novel The Chicken Club
fairly well.In its original form, it
was titled No Hotter Fire and was double
the word count that it now contains.It
was my learning curve as I worked with an editor for the first time.Editing your work is serious business.I would have to say, much more difficult than
drafting the story itself.It took
several months and I had to dig in with everything I had to give, and then give
some more in order to make this novel the best that it could be.
There are so
many elements you have to pay attention to:
·Is
the plot stimulating for your audience?
·Are
the characters strong and appealing?
·Are
the scenes filled with enough vivid prose to bring it to life around the
characters?
·Do
the characters converse through strong dialogue instead of living in their
heads?
·Are
you writing in first, second, or third person, and are you following the format
correctly ?
·Are
you following the latest rules applied to the written novel?
·Have
you checked all spelling, punctuation and grammar?
·And
the list goes on.
I am positive
that during the editing phase, I reviewed and revised my stories a minimum of
thirty times each.Yes, my eyes glossed
over and I continued to read what “should” have been on the page versus what “was”
on the page.You come up with tricks to
help combat this problem, but it still means reading it over and over to attain
a certain level of professionalism, not to mention personal contentment and satisfaction
for a job well done.
Getting back to
the story of The Chicken Club, it is
indeed a story about chicks (or chickens as they are referred to within the
pages of this book).It was written at
the latter part of a ten year phase in my life in which I was divorced and
raising two teenage boys on my own.My
friends and I often compared stories of living and dating in a world gone mad
so it was befitting that some of those stories were amassed, enhanced, and
applied so as to archive those moments for posterity’s sake.Not all the scenes in this book originated
from existing happenstances.Those used however,
were modified not only to protect the innocent but to make them more thoroughly
entertaining for my audience.
The
Chicken Club
was my debut novel.Renee and Angela are
endearing characters that would go to the moon and back to protect their
children, safeguard their friendship, and survive the dating world one man at
time.But more importantly, they know
who they are and manage to convince a group of women that they are all strong
and resilient and beautiful.This story
is full of humor and drama and reflects at times, the lint trap of life, but more than
that, it’s a story about friendship at its core.And what a friendship it is.
I love to watch
people.Yes, I’m one of those sitting
amongst strangers taking in my surroundings. I find that people are positively interesting.I study body language, facial expressions, demeanor,
quirks, attitude and more.Think of the
following situations and how the crowd around you would appear:
·Sporting
Events – Football, Baseball, Basketball, Hockey
·Music
Concerts – Rock, Pop, Country, Christian
·Weddings
– Big and formal, Small and quaint
·Movie
Premiers – Drama, Thriller, Romance, Sci-Fi
·Airports
– Large and crazy, Small and less stressful
·Cruise
Ships – Upscale Princess or Royal Caribbean to easygoing Carnival
Analyzing people
from afar helps to shape the spirit my characters are fabricated from.There is a thrill found in creating characters
from scratch.You take complete control
in developing their appearance, continuing through to their deep inner core.The better you know your characters, the more
life you give them.The more life they
have, the bigger they become on the page.The bigger they are on the page, the faster your readers engage with your
story.
Storytelling is
the not-so-secret love of my life.My
characters are an important part of that.The characters make the novel successful.Even with a weak plot, convincing characters
can make it strong.I’ll continue to
search the crowds around me for the characteristics that sprout novel
ideas.I started on this journey with a dream in my
heart, pursued it with passion and conviction, and will to continue it with
grace and integrity.
Ink:a colored usually liquid material for writing
and printing
This definition
is found in the Merriam-Webster dictionary.I envision ink on a page as black
on white.The careful caress of ink in
an artist’s stroke beckons our attention.The beauty of a black on white drawing comes to life beneath his
fingertips.The haunting lines create an
image that attracts the human eye.I’m
not excluding colors.Color adds flair
and builds body onto the page in a way black and white do not. There is however, something simple and antiquated
about the contrast between the colors of midnight and snow living on the same
page in perfect balance.I feel that for a writer, the ink is black and
the page is white.(For you music buffs,
this is not a reference to the ever familiar Three Dog Night song.)
Long ago, a
quill dipped into a bottle of ink was used to concoct letters or notes or
journals or maps using quality penmanship.Writings were truly a work of art.Today we don’t worry about penmanship when writing in the digital age as
our text is mostly produced through the computer keyboard, phone or tablet.Using any of these as tools of communication,
the keystrokes are generally black while the page is white.With storytelling, you add color through the
written word.Interjecting hue and
texture to your prose lifts the scene off the page, giving it dimension and drama,
immediately bringing it to life.Life is
what every writer strives for.
The black and
white preference is solely my own.The
definition of ink above clearly states “colored” liquid.Color may be your preference and that is
perfectly okay.In fact, color makes the
natural world beautiful.And if you’re
so inclined to color your hair pink or purple or blue, that’s okay too!You are your own story in the making.